【日記】英作文をひたすら上げるスレ【課題等】

1 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/09/23(水) 18:53:19.33 ID:9sS+uNBhd.net

◆主旨
英語で日記、記事やエッセイなど自分の好きなネタをひたすら投稿して、アウトプットの練習をするスレです。
ただし、英検関連や和文英訳以外のものとします。

語学はインプットも大切ですが、アウトプットも同じくらい大切です。こちらで自分の英語力を試したり、他人の英作文を見て、英語学習のモチベーションを維持していきましょう。

◆ルール
・ひたすら投稿ということで長さは1文から複数の長文まで可とします。

・ボランティアで添削してあげることはありとします。また、添削依頼もありとします。

・区別できるように英検の作文や和文英訳は下記のスレでお願いします。

関連スレ
【英検1級・準1級】英作文を添削し合うスレ
https://lavender.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/english/1543510584/
【和文英訳】英作文添削スレ【自由英作】
https://lavender.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/english/1348665060/

57 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/11(水) 06:53:55.94 ID:VPSrQ4C1a.net

Today’s my topic of 1000 writing marathon is large-scale tax cheats.

China origin Corona-virus is spreading all over Japan. Patients increase daily.
People stop to go out for fear contaminate.
Business like restaurants , tourist industry, retailers, etc, suffered sharp sales decline from
people’s self-control to go out.

Government decided to help the business by supplying the subsidy to them. It is emergency
situation. It needed quick and simple procedure to receive the benefit.
Everybody can receive the subsidy only attach copies of tax reports.

As a result, many youngsters who received the benefit, by counterfeiting tax documents,
appears one after another.
The theory of good human nature wasn’t current.

73 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 00:05:51.55 ID:8kQV+iK70.net

>>70
It is really interesting that in Shoshazan Engyoji in Okayama there were billboards
drawing pictures of a female noble lady, as into the mountain of the temple only male people were allowed to enter. And, it is interesting as well that the name of the mountain is Shoshazan, as the name of the mountain in Himeji, where Benkei was said to have studied, is the same.

55 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/10(火) 11:16:44.54 ID:BP12eghoa.net

Luck of vocabulary, luck of my English writing ability, it is very difficult for me to write
clearly such complex and abstract matters.
But this is a practice, I try.

>>51
We are surrounded many modern civilization’s products.
These products have it’s origin all in a human brain.
To say short, once human brain think something, it is within a reach of realization in this
world, sooner or later, I think.

Human brain’s activity is a reflection of real world, a reflection of material circumstances
and intellectual inheritance knowledge.
Contradiction, collision, anxiety, desire, greed, power, etc, all these elements mingled in
this world. Human brain keenly sensed these elements, and from that he reflect, think,
image, sublimate something. Science and skill helps to realize such human brain’s ideas.

If there are certain possibilities exist in this world, wrong or right, human certainly will sense
it. So, I am afraid Movie the Terminator’s world someday become real world.

Why China name her total cyber control system ‘The Sky Net System,’ same name as
movie ‘Terminator.’ ?

2 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/09/23(水) 19:01:15.91 ID:9sS+uNBhd.net

ないので、建ててみた。

とりあえず一投。

The original sentence from Manyoshu where the naming of new era, “令和”, was quoted:
于時初春”令”月 氣淑風”和”梅披鏡前之粉

It says:
Under the spring moon, the wind is calm, and the plum blossoms bloom as if they are the white face powder that a beautiful woman in front of a mirror puts on, and the orchids smell like an incense that stays around her robe.

64 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 08:40:24.57 ID:3dPwQP/za.net

>>59

I don’t agree your opinion.
I suppose you mistake China for Japan.

It is said that the pressure to follow government is strong in Chaina.
So, some people feel it cramped to live there.
And, police arrest people who don’t obey government order

15 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/10(土) 02:35:31.22 ID:geoKkhGl0.net

I want to know what native speakers will say about my writings. Will they say
what I write is Japanese English as someone mentioned?

75 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 04:49:54.76 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

HelloTalkもおすすめだ。無料でランダムなネイティブが添削してくれる。友達を作ればちゃんとやってくれる人を選べる。

49 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 06:57:18.31 ID:nWxBzM4da.net

My computer is watching my life.
The computer analyze all my activity on it; my browsing histories of netsurfing, writing of
homepage, twitter and bulletin board, such a vast data enable to guess my desire, tendency ,
liking correctly.

Such cyberspace watching limited on commercial base in the western world.
But totalitarian state like China, already established total control system over cyberspace.
China boast by naming it “ the sky net system.”
I fear, someday computer takes over human control, like a movie ‘Terminater.’

46 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 06:52:26.46 ID:nWxBzM4da.net

>>45
I am not the person who wrote the sentence, but your advice is helpful. Thank you.

59 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/11(水) 21:58:25.65 ID:RLZlaiQf01111.net

It is said that the pressure to follow suit with others is strong in Japan.
So, some people feel it cramped to live here.
And, police look like punishing people who don’t behave like others.

61 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 07:57:28.47 ID:3dPwQP/za.net

>>51
> ・・such “I-need-your-clothes-your-boots-and-your-motorcycle” thing・・

This expression is very cool and very interesting !
‘Terminator’ has progressed from mere violence action movie to more intellectual future
suggestive apocalyptic movie, I think. So, I recommend you to see‘Terminator&.’

You may surprize that at last cyber-robot become to have consciousness and emotion.
We can’t distinguish cyber-robot and human being.
‘Terminator&’cast us the profound question what is the human being?

13 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/09(金) 08:07:24.23 ID:VUqqrAqx0.net

>>12
Can you elaborate?

16 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/10(土) 06:50:01.81 ID:jzauhG4rd.net

>>11
many people…in Japanは
many Japanese peopleの方が普通では

コンパクトにまとめれば日本人が書いたか分からない。でも、ネイティブの言い回しはシンプルだけど表現の幅が広い。それができない非ネイティブでもシンプルであれば良いとネイティブが言ってた。

3 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/09/26(土) 21:24:24.45 ID:Xmvg44Pda.net

i am a pen.

31 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 16:19:06.42 ID:LqEZiqsHd.net

>>30
they are capable of か、、、

71 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/13(金) 21:37:41.06 ID:aYSPZs0ma.net

NHK radio 2 broadcasting will start new lecture program “ to read Izumi- Shikibu’s diary”
from tomorrow evening to next march. I recommend to listen the new lecture.
To prepare to tomorrows lecture, I have read Izumi- Shikibu’s diary since last week.
And I incline to try translate as a practice.

52 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/10(火) 00:49:27.24 ID:GNtg6t0Y0.net

>>51
Haven’t you heard the word singularity?
Haven’t you watched the film where HAL killing passengers appears?

51 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 21:53:32.37 ID:6mOO+n0u0.net

The science fiction film “Terminator” is quite brilliant, particularly Part One and Two.
Those decades-old pieces are still a lot more fantastic than many films released today.
They are literally SF classics.
I lost an interest from Part Three on…and haven’t seen the newest one.
How is it ?

I would be negative about such “I-need-your-clothes-your-boots-and-your-motorcycle” thing
turing into reality in the future no matter how sophisticated science technology will be.
Machines are programs. They cannot do anything more than programs direct or order.
If they should attack humans, it means programmers design them to work that way.

74 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 00:11:45.02 ID:8kQV+iK70.net

These days I feel very tired. I feel somewhat difficulty in seeing.
And, I tend to feel depressed sometimes.

8 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/03(土) 10:49:10.52 ID:hQKzxq940.net

One thing I don’t like posting on 5ch is that I can’t delete my posts when I
accidentally write something I didn’t intend to. On other platforms such as
Reddit or any other chan, you can delete your own posts.

41 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 23:20:21.64 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net

>>40

> Money is vertically a most powerful driving force of our economy, without which we cannot afford the standard of living today, and the good economy supports the purchasing powers which *drive* the economy further, allowing us to issue bonds to increase our capacity of businesses around town.

28 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 15:57:10.63 ID:QaYtDOz8a.net

One day South Korean student asked Polish student.
“Which was the country most suffered in World War.”

“I think Poland was most.”Polish reply as a matter of fact.
Hearing this answer, South Korean student got fury, making his face red, and said.
“No! it’s wrong. Most suffered country was Korea!”

“Don’t you know the world history?” ask Polish student.
“I know the World History. Imperial Japan had invade Korea, and rounded up 200 thousand
Korean women to sex slave. Korean men also were forced to hard labor in the coal mine.”
said South Korean student with full of confidence.

Polish student surprised this outrageous comment, and thought he was crazy or brainwashed
maniac.

35 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 21:27:24.06 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net

To name a few, religious, money and organizations including nations and companies exemplify this.
They are all just a figmentation of our imagination, meaning they don’t actually exist in this world.
In stead, we, or a society as a whole believe them as if they are unquestionable rules or creeds that have long been sitting on the chair of human history, so to speak.

68 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 22:51:58.78 ID:Vx3kx8ugd.net

THE DIARY OF IZUMI SHIKIBU

A.D. 1002-1003

MANY months had passed in lamenting the World,1ore shadowy than a dream. Already the tenth day of the Deutzia month was over. A deeper shade lay under the trees and the grass on the embankment was greener.2hese changes, unnoticed by any, seemed beautiful to her, and while musing upon them a man stepped lightly along behind the hedge. She was idly curious, but when he came towards her she recognized the page of the late prince.3e came at a sorrowful moment, so she said, “Is your coming not long delayed? To talk over the past was inclined.” “Would it not have been presuming?orgive men mountain temples have been worshipping. To be without ties is sad, so wishing to take service again I went to Prince Sochi-no-miya.”

英訳無理ゲーな件(^-^;
トライは素晴らしい。

36 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 21:29:14.68 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net

>>34
either の位置を directly or indirectly の前に

6 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/02(金) 15:23:21.29 ID:iiVNwT100.net

Thank you, OP. I’ve always wanted this kind of thread.
I found a similar thread in French on Reddit, but I couldn’t find it in English.

24 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 14:43:19.71 ID:V+0mPsI20.net

Crossing a field with milk vetch blooming in profusion,
Waving a parasol, then a black locomotive blows a whistle.
By a tree of a walnut, a lunch time of us two alone.
You are in good mood tasting my hand-made cookies.

Flingging on a yellow cardigan, I’m a butterfly fluttering in wind.
And, you are sure to be a honeybee, penetrating my heart with a knife of love.
Yes. I am wating, closing my eyes.
You’re dozing on my knee as a pillow, with your hair soft, like a child.
Something has been changing, like tearing an old book.
I am changing to me I haven’t known myself.
And, a yellow cardigan.
I put it softly over your chest while you’re sleeping.
I haven’t had such tenderness before as getting at a loss wondering how I had become.
Yes.
You are the only prince for me.

9 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/03(土) 11:08:02.95 ID:hQKzxq940.net

I learned that Zrump tested positive for COVID-19.
He is old. I hope he doesn’t die.

37 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 21:35:26.17 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net

いろいろ見直して再投稿。

What is the fundamental difference between human and other animals?
There are many contributing factors which affected either directly or indirectly, such as technologies that enabled us to recreate the Earth, or our brains that made it possible to invent tools or systems in which we live in.
But the most notable one is our intellectual attribute with which we magnificently make believe something is there that has not actually existed in a real sense.
In other words, we have made up the system that came into being by our power of collective imagination, which in turn made it possible for humans to work in tandem in such a large margin other wild animals simply couldn’t afford.
To name a few, religious, money and organizations including nations and companies exemplify this.
They are all just a figmentation of our imagination, meaning they don’t actually exist in this world.
In stead, we and a society as a whole believe them as if they are unquestionable rules or creeds that have long been *sitting on the chair of human history, so to speak.

*は比喩的な表現。

42 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/08(日) 20:25:44.96 ID:ZuocS+WUa.net

South Korean activists try to set so-called comfort-women’s bronze statue in the street
of Berlin, German’s capital city.
They claim the so-called comfort women’s statue is the symbol of Japanese army’s cruel
atrocity in the World War.
Japanese rounded up 200 thousands Korean women and forced to military sex slaves.

It is lie. It is very funny. Why they cling to such old issue now?
Reason is very clear. Comfort women’s movement is their business; as a mean of make a
living, and make a profiting.
They collect huge donation under the pretext of doing charity of ex-so-called comfort
women; then embezzle donation to their personal use.
South Korean leader of this movement recently was indicted for fraud and embezzlement
by South Korean prosecutor’s office.
It very rousy.

So-called comfort women’s statues now changed to the symbol of ugly shameless money
fraud.

77 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 05:18:08.12 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

補足
一年というのは毎日200単語程度の作文を書いた計算だ。添削必須。
3年やればネイティブと同じくらいにはなりそう。
無料という人は実際にやってないか、やらないだけの人だと思う。

40 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 23:17:03.78 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net

今日はやる気になったので、ここまで

Next up is a monetary system.
Although the banknotes are made of paper or rigid data, the piece of this material and digital data are by no means worthy of what they can buy.
They are approved by yet another imagination called ‘authorities’ under which we exchange material goods and services.
Money is vertically a most powerful driving force of our economy, without which we cannot afford the standard of living today, and the good economy supports the purchasing powers which drives the economy further, allowing us to issue bonds to increase our capacity of businesses around town.

79 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 05:38:04.76 ID:bN/aWwGoa.net

>>72
Thank you for your comment and advice.
But I have enough income to live on.
If you wrote in English, it would be more welcome.

>>75
Did you do?
I don’t want to be bother with the unnecessary thing.
Self practice can do at any time, I think it is the best way to improve my English writing.

10 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/06(火) 22:41:32.41 ID:ZtgLZnOWd.net

哲学:構造主義への誘い

When we categorize animals, we look into thier physical traits to see which one is which kind.
The most famous classification is Animal Kingdom, which first divides animals into two types, one of which is vertebrates.
And then, vertebrates are classified into 5 sub-groups–Amphibians, Fish, Birds, Mammals and Reptiles.
This sophisticated categorization is all credited to the scientific progress that have been made since 18th centuries.
We take this for granted.
In other words, there’s a consensus view that everyone understands how we group the animals by their physical aspects.
In ancient China, however, the way people understand the world is totally different.
Take the animal classification for example, ancient Chinese people categorize animals like this:
Noisy Animals
Smelly Animals
Useful Animals
Animals that we can consume as food

Imagine you try to convince people back then that how they understand the world is wrong.
You could easily imagine that nobody takes it seriously.
Likewise, If our descendants from a very distant future somehow managed to arrive our modern world, it is not surprising they would do the same as we would do to those ancient people.

62 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 07:58:35.53 ID:3dPwQP/za.net

I want to believe my English is improving. Writing English every day is tough work. But I try.
. Practice makes perfect.

78 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 05:18:45.81 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

無料→無理

84 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 21:55:06.77 ID:G/AqfzHJa.net

Don’t overrate a native speaker of English who live in Japan.
They are almost dropout of mother-countries.
They can’t show you clear and sharp aesthetic English.
They can correct some words spelling and some basic grammatical mistakes at the most.
But wrong composition is wrong. Crows are never the whiter for washing themselves.

Good teacher is able to rewrite your awkward English composition, keeping essence of your
outlook and intention, and could show you the example of clear and sharp aesthetic English
sentences, like reconstruct the wrong design building.

Most effective way to improve English writing is practice.
Next is reading great numbers of English books.

58 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/11(水) 07:43:07.30 ID:/rBi2O88a.net

There are more than 6,000 young people who received government subsidy, consult their
voluntary disclosure of their tax cheats, want to evade criminal charges.
Too late!It has to be severe punishment for them.

In Japan, when you lost your purse on the road, most are report to the police box within an
hour. It is said that Japanese are such good-will people. This is a myth.

Some person is complaining that the moral of the Japanese decline. I don’t think so.
I think 20 percent of Japanese are drop out originally.
They easily commit bad thing. They didn’t remorse their wrongdoing without punishment.

22 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 12:29:42.40 ID:n/Mcvc4ya.net

I killed a roach yesterday night in the kitchen.
He or She’s very big, black, swift moving son of a bitch.
I scared and sprayed ‘Mama Killer’ on the roach.
Instantly the roach ascended to heaven
Oh I killed the roach, not mama.
‘Mama Killer’ is another Japanese English!

81 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 06:04:40.13 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

The art of fending off stress.

People in the modern world, one way or the other, cooperate with each other to maintain the high standards of living.
Where some produces crops and other provides processed food in a specialized manner that every job is neatly coordinated together in order to make a high productivity.
However, when it comes to work, people are constantly exposed to stressful situations under which they perform their tasks.
Just because you happen to face those awkward moments doesn’t necessarily mean that they can stress you out.
Please read the article below 😁

https://www.irishtimes.com/business/work/three-ways-to-fend-off-stress-1.2469728

89 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 23:18:22.76 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

>>24
I thought you quoted that poem from somewhere else because I haven’t had the slightest idea that this was actually “your original poem”. Speechless lol

48 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 06:55:53.74 ID:nWxBzM4da.net

Dualism is a simple way to understand the world.
I am sometimes a Dualist.
I divide the world affairs into two elements.
For example, life and death, good and evil, beauty and ugly, mean and gentle, etc.
Antonym is very important.

54 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/10(火) 11:10:21.84 ID:BP12eghoa.net

>>53

I don’t know what means DOUBLE SPEAK..
You write it all caps, so, I wonder at first it is a book’s title or movie’ name.
I refer wiki. I see it, Doublespeak.
Yes, there is doublespeak flooding.

83 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 07:28:45.52 ID:VNXRJGe10.net

素人のネイティブの添削なんてダメ
ライターじゃないと
まず金稼げ
英語が金を稼ぐ役に立ってない

76 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 05:15:00.93 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

例えば>>34からの一連の文もみっちり添削された。
これをループするとお金を使わずに文章力を高められる。
真面目に作文を勉強したのは正味一年くらいかな?
今後もがんばる

86 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 22:11:22.84 ID:G/AqfzHJa.net

>>72
>>75
Don’t give advice unasked.
Please write your experience in English.
Don’t write Japanese in this thread.

17 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/12(月) 02:20:45.59 ID:RdTwAeqd0.net

I made a post here.
https://lavender.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/english/1596250228/500

One day I want to reach native-like fluency and become able to write freely in English as I’m able to now in Japanse.

32 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 16:53:59.96 ID:LqEZiqsHd.net

簡単な文も。

What is the advantages of living in a country side?
Come to think of it, they all boil down to two reasons.
One reason is economical. You pay less for everything.
Whereas in the cities, goods are more expensive and popular products are often sold out.
Another reason is associated with stress in
everyday life. You can commute with a car facing less traffic.
On the other hand, you are forced to use very crowded transportations in a city like Tokyo.

19 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/06(金) 07:02:40.92 ID:OYx7LJTka.net

Though new thread could so easily open by everybody, many threads of 5 channel’s
English board are neglected soon.

I think the person who opened this thread has a responsibility by writing everyday in English,
provide some interesting topics, and call many writing responses, and not leave void.
But most of thread bearer tend to be fall to a irresponsible attitude, such as luck of
maintenance, would invite a state of anarchy in English board.
I shocked many threads are left void only but a few writing.
It is a great pity.

Let try to bury this goddamn thread in the past storehouse by flooding 1000 writing
as soon as possible!

14 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/09(金) 21:12:50.67 ID:QqQ0G01qd.net

>>10
ネイティブチェック版

When we categorize animals, we look at thier physical traits to see which one goes to which group.
The most famous classification is the Animal Kingdom, which first divides animals into two types, one of which is vertebrates.
And then, vertebrates go on to be classified into 5 sub-groups–Amphibians, Fish, Birds, Mammals and Reptiles.
This sophisticated categorization is all credited to the scientific progress that has been made since 18th century.
We take this for granted.
In other words, there’s a consensus view that everyone understands how we group the animals by their physical characteristics.
In ancient China, however, the way people understand the world is totally different.
Take the animal classification for example, ancient Chinese people categorize animals like this:
Noisy Animals
Smelly Animals
Useful Animals
Animals that we can consume as food
So cats with different attitudes go into different categories 😂
Imagine yourself trying to convince people back then that their understanding of the world is wrong.
You could easily imagine that nobody takes you seriously.
Likewise, If our descendants from a very distant future somehow managed to arrive in our modern world, it is not a surprise if they would do the same as we would towards those ancient civilizations.

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